Fiction Adaptation: Essay

Ficton Essay

This is the draft essay that I handed in today, its total of 1165 words is about half of what I will be handing in on December 12th.
I am quite proud of this essay as i have lots of notes and quotes I just needed to sit and write the essay, now as the draft needed to be between 500-1000 words I was going to hand in about 500 words but I was on a roll when writing this and I decided to hand in as much as I possibly could today so I know whether what I have written was the right stuff.
I feel that at the start of the essay I did waffle a little bit so the beginning might not be right but I felt that the person marking the essay might not know much about the subject so I wrote a bit about it.